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GO TAKE A LOOK NAO >>>>> http://noscrubs.net/discussions/recent-discussions/results-arciris-character-event

Also admins, please lock this thread now that the event's over, thank you in advance! And thank you everyone for making this such a success! Bless your faces!

Okay, well tell her her spot's still reserved as long as her comment's there on this thread. D:

she is now just lil delays ;x

Ehhhh? D: Hope she's alright!

She was in Hospital :C maybe that didn't let her finish her work but but i wish! :/ ill pm her in fb

Time's up! It's 12 a.m, and the 1st of May here now. Important messages:

@Miru: Please tell us if you'll still consider entering, you have your spot reserved in your earlier comment on this thread. We can hold back submission to the judges for at least a while longer. Wouldn't want your effort to go to waste. It sounds like you got a really good story too. :<

And to anyone who still, really, really want to enter, tell us right now while we still have time.

I FORGOT! MortemSicarius as the 12 yearo old Reah )

Aw! But we'd still like to see it! D:

Migs as Arv
TheCallB0y as One of the Trans of boss/Guard of Shilly
Faladriel as Gie's Sister
Ivey as the one who made the Phoenix
March as the one who made phoenix and dragon
Messilla as Ayrine
Synnefo as one of the Trans of Boss
IceCandy as One of the Guards/Boss Trans
nau as Ligea
Presia as Percy
Others if not mentioned my alt xD
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GUYS THANK YOU SO MUCH W/O you guys this would be Impossible.

SOOOOOO GUYS! Here’s the 2nd (last?) chapter of the story, had to put in another reply just cause i can’t edit my 1st post, Btw! Thanks for those who shared there precious time reading my piece i have so much to say hihihi more later! Let’s get this on now, 30 SS :x
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Gie: I have to get Ores again world bosses are really fast in spawning these past few weeks, hmm.

Gie: Sigh... It’s been a week since i dreamt of that well, i’ll be living in dreams!
(weird sound and a voice)

Voice: Come Gie, here more ores here!

Gie: who’s that? Hmm i’ll try tocheck.

Gie: ugh, nothing here, I’m daydreaming, what?!? *disconcerted face*

Voice: here, come here!

Gie: now what *Surprised*






Gie:*rubs eyes*

Gie: WHAT IS THIS THING?!?!

Voice: It’s me The Phoenix Blaze (TPB)

Gie: okaaaaaay, i get it now I’m dreaming again, no just no , not now Mother needs ores *annoyed face*

TPB: Shut it! This is real deal Gie.. we need you!

Gie: hmm, I’ve heard that before, i wanna be a sorcerer and blah blah *stick tongue out*

TPB: you’re the chosen Arcanist.

Gie: The what?

TPB: The Arcanist, you’ll be the one who’ll save Arcana from despair.

Gie: *Laughs* Despair? How Arcana seems so fine nothing devastated *Doubts*

TPB: I know that you’ll say that.

Gie: *pinches self* got to wake up now..!

TPB: I said this is real! Getting back, I’ll show you what really is happening in Decomus.

Gie: wait, wait what? That place is only for high class families, Humans..

TPB: you’ll know. Look at this.




Gie: *rubs eyes* are we here now?

TPB: we are. I brought you here to see what is really happening for now you have to talk to that guy. He’s the guardian here and i forgot *stares on gie*

Gie: what with that loo----k!?!? WOW, i look Different now feel so light! (*in his mind* well sure this is adream but i have to ride now later i’ll wake
up for sure)

TPB: you got a weapon as well, thats from Pharaoh its light and blessed by me. What i need you to do is talk to them or kill them if they show something you know you should act.

Gie: WHAT?!? so what am i going to----? She left already, well.






Gie: I am Gie, you sir?

Booga: Booga Swordwind, call me Booga. The Phoenix Blaze brought you here? You must be the Arcanist.

Gie: Arcanist.. yeah Arcanist. .. so, whats happening here? I see Catapults firing and gates are locked!

Booga: long story, but here it is. Since Prince Shilly and his family left Decomus, Evil Giant named Gigantes came here with this other giant fellows with different battlers with bows and arrows, swords, spears. That why we’ve upgraded the Guard System here.

Gie: but why did that happen? Why did Prince and his family left?

Booga: Gie, Im just a guardian here.

Gie: I see, thanks. Now i gotta move.
(as he walks towards the gate)

Gie: Wait who is this *Big eyes* is this another guardian? But it’s a bit odd he’s too big i’ll try approaching then.

Gie: Hey Big Guy! can you let me pass?

Humbaba: *Attacks Gie*

Gie: WHATS WRONG?!?! *covers face*




Gie: This! must be one of Gigantes Battlers.

Gie: *puts out staff* so.... It casts by itself, boring *pout*

Voice: it's your will

Gie: Huh? I need to do this faster, the Ores *nods*

Gie: this is kind of an easy thing than my last dream, well.
(defeated Humbaba)

After he passed all the the other Soldiers~~

Gie: why does it seem like I mastered all my skill. *wonders*

Gie: A GIANT PRIEST! *LAUGHS*

Gie: what can he do *sarcastic mode (lol)*




Sharlach: *Hits Gie* *uses that thing that makes him Invincible*

Gie: why does it seem invincible?

Gie: *holds on pocket* whats this?

Gie: oh its a Damage Absorb removal?

Gie: whatever this is might work on this priest! *throws to Sharlarch*

Sharlach: *Rage mode*

Gie: so the light thingy, he seem vincible now!

Gie Defeated Sharlarch~ (obviously)


While on his way to next Bosses~

Gie: am i lost?

(random Rouge attacks him)

Gie: ugh! what should i do. they're attacking me.

Gie: i did it but, they damaged me allot!

Gie: i'll try one thing i learned.. *meditates*

*HEALING*

Gie: I did it!, bt how i learned that through my dream, AMAZING!

Gie: but its weird how i still know how to--------- NO!

Zaras: *moves to Gie's position*



Gie ran and got cornered in a closed gate

Gie: I'm helpless i need to attack him, he seem so strong though.

as he sets himself to attack Zaras pushes him.

Gie: this would be a pretty good fight.

Zaras head to him. Gie uses a hard skill to master, Meteor Shower.

Gie: I did it. its fun! i'll forgot bout the ores for now.

Gie saw the gate opened, as he enter he fought all the Tanks that were too tanky so it took him hours to beat all.

Gie: pssh, that was pretty hard now this Tank... ..

Gie Rushed to the tank some flash backs happened.

Gie: Wait what? *shakes head* why does those i meet in my dreams running in my mind. sigh..

He defeated the Tank now he saw something that he thinks may open the gate, to go inside the Marquis mansion.





As soon as Gie got inside The Mansion he rushed to Gigantes.

Gie: so there you are Gigantes!, what have you done here? *attacks fierce-fully*

Giagantes was bit faster than him. but something boosted Gie.

Gie: Whoa! that was close. I dodged his sword!





Gie Defeated the boss. The Phoenix Blaze is back.





TPB: how was Decomus?

Gie: I have lots of Questions to you, how how how?

TPB: I know. you'll ask that I'm telling you all that happened to you week ago were true.

Gie: thats why I still know how to use skills? and be a good Fighter?

TPB: Precisely.

Gie: buuut---- shes gone again.

Gie ported somewhere. he doesnt know.. seem like a Forest. well weird forest.



Gie: WHAT ARE YOU? WHERE IS PHOENIX?? WHERE AM I?

Dragon Sage: I'm the so called "Dragon Sage" (DS) you have so much questions shut up. this is the Wood Garden, it hidden in Logging Area. you need to observe things and as what you did Decomus, you'll do it here.

Gie: so i have to kill them all? *shocked* why don't you guys just do it you're the dragon sage and the other is phoenix blaze what going on why me?

DS: SHUT UP.

as the Dragon Sage vanished Gie head right to Gerry's Refuge.


Gie: A Statue? This is so so easy!

Gie continuously hit the statue, something came out.

Gie: WHAT IS THIS its chasing me! wait i have better speed now

But Gie Fainted...



Gie: he's fast though!

Gie swiftly attacked Gerry.

Gie: how did i attack that fast?

Gie discovered something bout how he attack. He called it Gerry Cast.

Gie: Gerry cast.. hmm Gcast! ill call it Gcast. *smiles like a goat*

Gie didn;t want to waste time he moved on to this boss named Tratequ

Gie: this is a HUGE statue i wonder how big this is, i think it won't be able to attack me, he's a fatty!
my gcast sure will kill it!

after he broke the statue..




Gie: WHAT IS THIS? EVIL FROG?

Gie was pulled he was helpless he thought of being in front of the frog and it ported him there.

Gie: my porting skills work! now I'm gonna use gcast on this being.

Gie did kill Tratequ. he head so slowly to Thiassis's nest since the frog used something to slow down his moves.




when he got to Thiassi's statue he sure used the gcast.
he's out of mana.

Gie: what should i do? *disconcerted face* i can't cast any skills if this is so.

Gie took a deep meditation, it sped up the recovery of this Mana, but thiassi did some damage to him, but since he's full mana he healed himself.

Gie: *tries gcast* haha! this never fail me.

As he head to Radon, the woodgarden tribe chased him but since again he has healing it was pretty nothing.

Gie: theres no statue of him? oh there he is!

Gie head to Radon so fast and it stunned him, he was unable to move.




Gie: what should i do?!?!? i can't move and my skills are not working!

Radon was attacking him continuously, when finally Gie made his way out of Radon's stun.

Gie quickly used all his skills due to annoyance of what radon did.

Gie: that's for you Radon fatty Dragon!




DS: DRAGON? DID I HEAR SOMETHING ABOUT ME?

Gie: no its about Radon, now what? everything is fun!

DS: i cannot be with you. I'll be bringing you to somewhere you know!

Gie ports into a Circus.

Gie: so this is whats inside Paniye, i feel so alone. Why did that two weird flying thingy leaving me *annoyed*

Gie: What the hell is that? is that a puppeteer?





Gie: I didn't know this things are inside PANIYE!!!

Gie was controled under Puppeteers hypno.

all he does was Attack ,Attack.

Gie headed to all the Boss and he is still under the hypno, no emotions, just kill kill kill. dodge dodge dodge.










Until he reached Payaso, the one that owns and arrange sequel of events in Paniye Circus.






Gie was automatically ported to another Place called Laioha.

he was still under the hypno. he's on a mode called" KILL THEM ALL"


So he had to fight with the Dinosaur called Drake but its splits in to 2 that Paralyzes his skills but that was just a piece of cake to someone hypnotized.





kill...





dodge




AND KILL. NOTHING CHANGED HE WAS REALLY ON A MODE THAT NO ONE CAN STOP.





There was a voice waking up Gie to his Consciousness. he was in a white place all white he tried to run but he goes nowhere.




Gie: WHAT HAPPENED? AND THIS ARMOR THIS WEAPON ITS BACK!

Gie was so confused to all the things that are happening.

he was ported somewhere...



GIE WAS SHOCKED ON WHAT HE SAW!

Gie: What?!? you guys are alive??!?

Radon, Gigantes, Special, Payaso: The Arcanist!

Gie: wait what?

Radon: Thanks for Letting us out of those Hell! they're made by this Evil Warlock named "Grimlock"

Gigantes: He made that all and made us a ferocious Monsters.

Special: That's true we're actually Guardians too.

We were just under Grimlocks Hypnotism. like what Puppeteer did to you. it makes Anyone Hunger for power and kill anyone that blocks it.

Now as we're thanking you Receive this Armor we made through our powers. The Arcanist Set. And take this Wings as the sign of winning us from Grimlocks dark magic.



Gie: THIS IS REALLY COOL!





Gie: By the way, where did the phoenix and dragon go?

Radon: Those 2 are you. they separated through your birth. you still have to know more Gie. More.
now you should go back to your Family and all those friends you thought was a dream is waiting for you to Kill Crystalisk to get to Grimlocks Lair.

Gie: about the dream.. What was that?

Special: ITS NOT A DREAM! its true The phoenix and dragon ported you in different times. those are people from different time without you noticing thats why things seems so so fast. but since you're the Arcanist you can work on almost everything using your IMAGINATION. we;ll thanks to you Gie! now Go back they're waiting on you. I have your Griffon there. with millions of pennies *smiles*

Gigantes: and Gie! you can live in the Mansion now. Just promise us you'll defeat Grimlock *waves as all the bosses ports*

Gie: Griffon! bring me back to The town!
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So here how it starts...
Gie got back to his parents there were Crowds waving at him And Prince Shilly welcomed him. he saw this Black Aura from Shilly, but what is it?
is he the?
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Let's see to Gies next Adventure now he's with his Friends from different time frames and Dimensions.



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GUYS I MADE IT IN TIME OF DEADLINE HAHAHA
I HAVE NOTHING MORE TO SAY BUT THANKS! TO THIS EVENT AND EVERYONE WHO APPRECIATED MY EFFORTS!
SPECIAL THANKS TO:

I became evil and took a screenshot!

Well, it's actually a great great thing to do such events like this, keep it up! hoping for more fun treats

How'd you do the evil Drkie o.o

Ty :3 I had a lot of fun writing it and taking the shots

And leaving the ending with suspense, I like.

Ahaha I love the continuation you did here!

ign: Yuni
character name: Yuni
16 yrs old

A unique orphan child that holds the key to save the world.

One day Yuni went out for a walk in town to grab some herbs for her sick mother, by the time she got back home her mother had died and her father was on his last breaths.
Yuni: (crying)Mama!
Papa: argh..uhh..cough..
Yuni: (crying) Papa!, what happened?
Papa: Me and your mom never told you anything ever since you were born,(cough), Your mom and I had u as our only child, we dont want our precious daughter to hate us of we we've done. Yuni, have you ever notice people acting weird around u?
Yuni: yes, but i dont care, cus all i know is that i have the best mama and papa in my life.
Papa: Everything that has happened in the past please forgive me and your mother. we hope that one day everyone well treat you as a person and not a beast. Your mom and i were exploring in the desert 1 day when u were still in your mothers stomach, Your mom found a precious orb in the hands of a dragon statue inside a dark cave. The orb was so shiny and was pretty, your mother decided to take the orb but the orb didnt move. there was something written on the statue, it says," to obtain this dragon orb u must sacrifice a living child's birth, once this new child is born he/she well obtain powers of a Dragon Beast, The Key To Save The World. Me and your mother just wanted our daughter to have a wonderful life, but i guess me and your mother did a bad thing to our precious little daughter.
Yuni: dont say that papa, maybe there's a reason why mama found this dragon orb in the 1st place, but what ever happened in the past i forgive you and mama, please dont leave me.....
Papa: Yuni, these beasts u see here are after you.
Yuni: why are these beasts after me papa?
Papa: you hold the power of the Legendary dragon orb, many years ago people and beasts and also dragons fought in wars to obtain this Dragon Orb, to control the world. Deep down in a Hidden cave holds a Dragon which is made out of Crystals. Beasts,dragons,and people called it Crystalisk, a ruthless dragon who only cares about powers and ruling the world and making people as its slaves, He Cherish this Dragon Orb so much that he will do anything to obtain it.
Yuni: But papa where is this orb? how do i use its power....i dont even know how to fight. i...i...(crying)
Papa: The Legendary Dragon Orb is inside you my precious daughter. Take this 2-hand Black-Cutter Massacre and go to town and talk to Spike Schulz about what happened, he's an old friend of mine while way back fighting these ruthless beasts. Before you go, Me and your mother treasure this Epic Dragon Armor we treasure it for you long ago, hoping one day these beasts well appear again. Spike schulz well teach you how to fight and become a warrior like you father.
Yuni: papa, dont leave me....
Papa: Me and your mother is so happy to have a wonderful daughter.......
Yuni: PAPA!!!!!!!!(crying)
Yuni went behind the house and dug up 2 holes for her loving mother and father. After hearing what her father told her, she took the 2-hand Black-Cutter Massacre and the Dragon Torment armor her mother and father treasured it for her. She got to town and explain everything to Spike Schulz. Spike trained her to be a fighter and to be brave.........1 year has past.....
Spike Schulz: Yuni, a year has past and you are getting better and better everyday now, its like seeing your father again..and look at you yuni you are unique and intelligent like your mother. I think you are ready for your adventure and we all prays for your return with the Crystalisk head.
Yuni: Thank you Spike for teaching me how to hold a weapon and using it. I'm a go and say goodbye to mother and father before i leave onto my journey. Thank you for everything Spike.
Yuni went to back to her house where she buried her mother and father. Yuni walked inside the house and saw a necklace, it was her mothers favorite necklace. Yuni picked up the necklace on the ground and puts it around her neck. Yuni Closes her eyes and by holding the necklace, she prays for her mothers guidance through a journey where she has no clue to begin with.
With the power of the Legendary Dragon Orb, The Dragon Torment armors her father and mother treasured for her, and The 2-hand Black-Cutter Massacre.
Will Yuni Be able to save the world and killed the Crystalisk Dragon?

IGN >>> Shirotsumekusa



Shirotsumekusa. She is just normal person to begin with, no talent, don’t have confidence. Born without know who her father is. Once she asks her mother about him, she said “Your dad is passed away due the war”, it is like avoiding her own daughter curiosity. But she knows, that was a huge lie to comfort her.

She known as love child, always bullied, no one is befriending her at her age. Only her mother, the one who always calm her heart, until she died due illness over years. The one most special for her is not on her side again. Everyone from her hometown hates her, but she not blaming anyone, not even her father.

From that point, she will seek the truth of her own story, walking away from her past memories, she began to journey. Until she found a person that help her when she surrounded by bunch of monster. That person is Prophet who always have faith in others, and like help people.

She then seeks the path to Prophet, based on person she met couple a day before. Now, after she makes it to Prophet and join ‘BestOfHonor’ she will continue help every person that she meet, even just “Buff please”, she will gladly give them support with a great smile. With that smile as pretty as white clover she searches her father information through it.

Note:
Shirotsumekusa > シロツメクサ > White Clover

Ahah thank you, but I'm in the ArcIris crew itself, one of the people working on publishing it. There's only 3 of us, so 3 judges.

Congratulations on being one of the judges

'Llo all. I'm one of the 3 judges for this contest. Made an account just to tell you guys, thank you very much for taking your time to join, this has been a really big surprise for us and we're really glad to see so many people take part in it.

Good luck everyone.

It was a long story and very funny plus it was well told ^^

Wow! it is a very good story and very special

IGN: Ayrine
Character Name: Ayrine

One day in Terminus kingdom the royal family had a normal day.


the queen Torlina and the king Ardon worked as always and their childhood Ayrine and Tarlin came with them to the tower. They saw the huge tower with all the guards and the servant, they was amazed because it was the first time that they came to the tower. All the day they walked in the tower and play Hide and seek and all was normal day, Then Ayrine and Tarlin hear a strange voice, they came down in the stairs and they saw robbers. The robbers caught Torlina and Ardon after the robbers saw the girls they caught them too, after 10 seconds they guardians came and caught the robbers, the robbers tried to fight the guardians but the guardians was too strong so all the robbers run away from there. After the robbers run away Ayrine looked at all the floors for Tarlin but she didn't found her, she tell to her parents and then one of the guardians came and tell to the queen that he found a letter from the robbers and the robbers said that if they want to see Tarlin again they need to give up and give to them the kingdom. Torlina and Ardon get panicked, they didn't know what to do. Ayrine said "We need to attack the robbers and get Tarlin back! Now! Before something will happen to her!!"
Ardon said "You right, the military will train for week and then we will attack them." Ayrine said "A week?!?!? we need to attack them fast before something will happen to her!! They are robbers!!" Torlina said to Ayrine "We know that, but we can't do anything right now". Ayrine said "Then let my go to fight with them you always said that I know to fight very well!". Torlina and Ardon laugh and Torlina said "Ayrine you are just a kid, it's too dangerous for you now, you will fight in the future when you will be older." Ayrine run from the tower back to her home and lock the door.
She looked for her parent's armor and for the big book of all the monsters. She found her dad armor and the big book, she looked in the book the master of Agility and she found there a monster called "Gerry" he knows how to sneak behind his enemies and steal things without being noticed. She decided to find Gerry and ask for help to save her sister. She came to the guardian of Wood Garden and she asked from him to let her enter, but the guardian didn't agree and told her that she is too young for that. Ayrine understand that she can't pass him and she left the place, after 2 minutes she came back but this time she sneaked from the guardian and enter to Wood Garden without being noticed.
When she enters there she sneaked to the spot where she can meet Gerry, she Destroyed the sculpture of Gerry and she saw a huge wolf. That wolf was Gerry.

Gerry looked at Ayrine and after 15 seconds he slap her.


Ayrine shout:"Stop!! Stop!! Why are you doing it????"
Gerry:"You here to kill me like everyone, right?"
Ayrine:"No!! I here to ask from you a help!"
Gerry:"What? Help in what? I am a wolf, what kind of help do you need?"
Ayrine:"Robbers took away my sister from me and i want to help her."
Gerry:"Aw, I think that I can help you with that."
Ayrine:"Really? How?"
Gerry:"I don’t need to give you any power, all you need to do is go to fight and you will see what I mean."
Gerry disappeared and Ayrine stayed confused but she knows that she needs to help her sister no matter what. She didn't know where to start looking, them came back home, her parents still was in the tower and they try to think what to do next. Meanwhile Ayrine looked at her parents books for information and she found one page, in the page she saw pictures of jail.
She read about this jail and she find out where the jail is, it was in place named "Decomus" without thinking she took her father's armor and her mother's weapon and she saw that this place doesn't has any guardian like in Wood Garden so she just enter to this place.
First she killed all the soldiers that were in the way, it was very hard but she was thinking only about her sister. She defeat all the soldiers and found the boss, the main monster who was watching this part of the jail. There were no robbers, so Ayrine killed the boss as fast as she can and she start look around for her sister.


Then she saw a girl, the girl was very scared and she closed her eyes, Ayrine saw the girl and she came closer, that girl looked familiar to her, Ayrine took a few steps more and then she saw Tarlin face.

Ayrine:"Tarlin??? Is that you???"
Tarlin:" who said that…?"
Ayrine:"Tarlin it's my, your little sister, Ayrine!"
Tarlin:"Ayrine!! I so glad to see you, I don’t know where I am, I can't remember nothing…"
Ayrine:"It’s a very long story, I will explain for you all later, let's go home how."

Ayrine and Tarlin came back to they parent. Torlina and Ardon saw Tarlin and they run to hug her, at the next minute they saw that Ayrine wears their armor and using their weapon.
They all came back to eat dinner They live to this day as one big happy family and Ayrine still got punishment because she used the armor and the weapon without permission, but she still think it was worth it.

Meeeehn thanks for reading this ToT It's...stupidly long, I know D: I can't seem to stop myself steamrolling through these things ToT
And the 'poast' is intentional XD Picked it up in the realms of internet *u*
P.S Aksel is the male sage mentioned above, when Hisaka met Kagiri again TuT He's saner ToT

I have revised and edited this entry to improve readability and fix mistakes, and also added a whole new part of the story! Be sure to re read it before judging :3

For a second there I read your comment as 'pic toasted' ...

I SURVIVED THE BEHEMOTH ENTRY!

Anyway, as expected of mehn, awesome job in conceptualizing and writing! \o/
*reins in the feels* The allegory of lightning and humanity... *feelsfeelsfeelsfeelsfeels* That's definitely my favorite part. You got me there and I am now just a puddle of feels trying and failiing to convey stuff.

You even managed to get the craziness of my char (something I failed spectacularly at lewls)~ ( /;3/

Pic poasted! File title says it all lol (that, and I'm as unimaginative as they could get @_@)

Post up his appearance soon! O: I'd really love to see this entry as one of the winning 3. xD

And something to drink too! XD /noms *u*

OH DEAR. DX Let me just..grab something to eat while I read orz

Thanks for reading T__T I know, the length's ridiculous, but the deadline's near and I'd be editing it forever if I don't submit it as it is @_@

WOW.

Posted. Good lawd this is an abomination. T__T

Thanks Ur )

ahhaha nice one. ))))))

*reads Reah part* ...yeah I always knew Gie was a pedo c:

hahaha great story gie i finally finish it XD Made me cry from laughing! Hope you win gie